Storyboard and corresponding narrative

This is our first draught of our storyboard. We've drawn simple sketches and placed them in a rough order so we know approximately where each shot will appear.
Because this is a trailer many shots will be repeated throughout and it will not be until we are onto the post production editing stage that we will be able to finalise exactly where each shot will appear.                                     

Our final narrative idea is this:

• A policeman and his wife have a daughter who commits suicide due to severe bullying from school peers
• The wife seeks revenge on the bullies and kidnaps, tortures and eventually murders them.
• Her husband however is unaware of this, and he is one of the policeman investigating the case.
• The husband discovers halfway through that his wife is the murderer and covers up for her so that the other detective does not suspect her.
• However this lands him in trouble as he is suspected to be the person kidnapping these girls.

We're going to focus on the parts where the girls are being held captive and the detectives trying to track the murderer ( a la "The Silence of the Lambs"). (See previous blogs of locations etc.).